The article doesn't have a cohesive connection throughout, has grammar issues and uses the same word in a sentence too often, for ex, using the word "plenty" twice in same sentence. 

The article looks as though it's written in a rushed manor and doesn't read correctly. There are a lot of times where unnecessary words are stuffed and out of context. 

Responded with comment: wont write for again.  

 

 

 

 

Looks good. Thanks 

good article, thanks 

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