I asked for good English, this is not good English in my opinion.
If you can alter it so it is good English, i will accept it.
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jamesw 2012-06-04
Article can't be related to any country, or city, It needs to be neutral but related to the subject.
I'm sorry, I can't accept this article, there's too many unnecessary and complicated words in sentences. The text is not easy too read. It supposed to be simple article on how to plan a party on a budget. Sorry.
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Lamman 2012-06-03
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