Thank you. Average article. On topic requiring grammar corrections and changes to make it flow better. 

 

Thank you. The article was on topic. There were some grammatical errors and flow that required fixing. 

 

I can't tell if this article was spun to pass copyscape, or maybe English isn't your first language, but there are several unnatural grammatical in each paragraph. Also, there are some technically correct but unnaturally used participles.