Rejected because there wasn't enough info about the topic (location).
Responded with comment: You could have given me another chance to edit them. Like any other writer, my iwriter rating is very important to me. You could have at least given me 3 stars. Now I am not an elite writer anymore. I went back to premium.
Ooops - you used the wrong keyword. The keyword is "church music software" and you used "church ministry software" in the text.
We really need the keyword to be "church attendance software" - we cannot have variation in that keyword.
Please rewrite with this as keyword and we'll accept.
First paragraph have a few errors.