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mmiys1 2013-04-27
too formal, over use of "one" inconsistent between first person and 3d person, unclear directions
Poor writing.
Nice Job!
Nice Job!
Nice Job!
Nice Job!
the grasp for the english language is very weak in this article. Sentences are not clear and there are numerous grammar erros.
nice job, thank you.
excellent work
English is too tough to edit in parts. Research is a bit disjointed. Editing this will take too long.
A little disjointed and some problems with the English, but overall good.
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