Good rewrite. 

Thanks very much John - all flowed very well. Appreciate your hard work. 

Great job more work coming soon. 

 

Sorry, there is repeats in this article. The SEO value in this article ain't too well constructed and the keywords doesn't really appear they way I wanted them too.
This is not the quality I was expecting. 

Convey the message of the health benefits of zumba in a simple and interesting style 

Thanks for the article but the structure of some of these sentences don't sound conversational.  

 

Good Work! 

Great for the price. 

 

 

Great job John i will have more work for you soon have a good weekend. 

Great job as always thank you John. 

 

thanks 

Thank you john i will have more work for you soon keep up the good work. 

Great job i know this was a hard one thank you. 

Excellent - many thanks 

Looks good, thanks! 

 

Thanks John another job well done. 

Great job once again John thank you. 

Thank you for your honest effort. This is actually much better than I expected. Sentences well constructed and you stayed close to the original idea from start to end. I added you to my favorites' list.
Thanks again,
JF Trin 

Thanks for your efforts but I don't feel comfortable with this article. All I wanted was a proper definition of what strategic planning is and a short discussion of the key components of a good strategic plan.I have to ask other writers now.