Sorry, there is repeats in this article. The SEO value in this article ain't too well constructed and the keywords doesn't really appear they way I wanted them too.
This is not the quality I was expecting. 

Convey the message of the health benefits of zumba in a simple and interesting style 

Thanks for the article but the structure of some of these sentences don't sound conversational.  

 

Good Work! 

Great for the price. 

 

 

Great job John i will have more work for you soon have a good weekend. 

Great job as always thank you John. 

 

thanks 

Thank you john i will have more work for you soon keep up the good work. 

Great job i know this was a hard one thank you. 

Excellent - many thanks 

Looks good, thanks! 

 

Thanks John another job well done. 

Great job once again John thank you. 

Thank you for your honest effort. This is actually much better than I expected. Sentences well constructed and you stayed close to the original idea from start to end. I added you to my favorites' list.
Thanks again,
JF Trin 

Thanks for your efforts but I don't feel comfortable with this article. All I wanted was a proper definition of what strategic planning is and a short discussion of the key components of a good strategic plan.I have to ask other writers now. 

Too much waffle and too many ambiguous sentences that don't really mean anything.  

You are my man!!! More to come my friend! 

 

Wow! Well done! I enjoyed the read in addition to being happy with the content! 

nice 

 

 

very happy 

 

 

Fantastic job 

I prefer more informative content. 

Thanks a lot. 

Very nice! Thanks! 

Thanks for the great work. added to Favorite Writers list 

cab write better words 

Great article. Followed instructions. Thanks 

Excellently written and just what was required - many thanks! :) 

The author wrote an article to my liking. I will definately use him again. Well done.

Johan Malan 

Not quality writing for a legal website 

I'm sorry John, this article is still not focusing on the age and is a little confusing to read. 

 

Great job as always i will be sending more work your way soon! 

Excellent work! Thanks. 

great job Just what I'm looking for will use you again! 

You do great work thanks again i will be using you again soon. 

Does not make sense 

Responded with comment: Yes sir, your keyword, "Intermittent Fasting Women", of which, you specified needed to be at 2% is not grammatically correct. And so, any sentence that has your keyword is not going to make sense. 

Although his article contains good information and is well written ,I need it for a website page - not a blog. Can you please break it up to be more suitable for a web site? Bullet points, titles, etc. 

Responded with comment: I would be happy too, but the article was rejected.