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hudi88 2011-12-27
Hi,
article has a lot of grammar issues, and is difficult to read, lacking flow.
Responded with comment: You are rejecting the article without any reason?
This has the makings of a good article. Well researched and thought through. I will still need to do a lot of editing though to bring it up to standard for my home-page article. Levonmarkos is the best of 3 writers I tried for this article.
Decent article, but poorly written in sections.
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