thanks 

very good work 

Excellent work  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Unfortunately the tone is not what we are looking for. We are looking for a casual tone that has more to do with the person saying the quote. Thanks. 

Nice one 

I gave specific instructions, the article had to be rewritten to focus on Yorkshire terrier breeds. You just made Yorkshire terrier appear about three time in the article without any extensive research done to make the article good to suite the breed 

thanks 

thanks 

thanka 

thanks 

Not bad. Thank you.