The article reads too much like a high school assignment. The construction wasn't logical enough either, for example you write about the car's safety features in one paragraph, and then devote another paragraph to safety again later in the article. 

 

Responded with comment: okay 

 

 

 

 

 

Just what I needed. Excellent quality! 

ok 

 

Quite well written, a couple of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. 

Great, thanks. 

Thanks 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is an excellent article thank you. 

 

good article. 

Did a qualitative job in short timing 

 

Good Job!