Nice work, thank you.
Thanks for taking direction and reworking the article. I can definitely use this. Please just be careful of repetition of words in paragraphs.
Lack of required sub headlines.
well written, thanks
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Ty1234 2012-07-24
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Hefner 2012-06-25
I like the tone and intention of the first sentence.
need more short sentences and other examples
Very good article. You made this subject interesting. Nice Work!
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raydot 2012-06-19
Responded with comment: at least give a reason
Some grammar errors.
Thank you
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demeva 2012-05-11