Please do not write this article if you can't write English as if it were your first language. I will reject it. 

Hi there,the article is not bad too much overoptimized with longhorn steakhouse keywords,please rewrite and come back.Thanks 

 

 

There is a Contradiction, ideas are badly organized and wording makes difficult reading, lack of proper paragraph breaks and the use of unnecessary words to express clearly.  

sorry, not the style or quality I was looking for 

Poor grammar, sorry I cannot accept. 

 

 

 

writin like a review for a tv not a book
 

Nice article Roselyn. Thanks for sticking to the topic and giving clear examples. Laura 

Thanks !!! 

Thank you for using the topic I gave you. 

 

Hello,
This article doesn't look to suit my purposes 

good job 

good job 

Good 

excellent job 

Excellent job!