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nidfat 2012-12-09
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nidfat 2012-12-09
good job
Not impressive, instead of describing how attractive the condo is, you are trying to explain to users where is the location.
And vocab used are very normal.
grammar erros make article hard to understand
good work short and concise
I have a very synonymous copy of this one awhile back, so no.
Sorry as I wrote in Article Purpose I need your own experience or a fictional story, but you didn't follow it, instead, wrote in a "research" style. Thanks for the try but after reading, I think your writing style may not fit the rewrite either.
grammar and vocabulary are poor
Does not meet Special Instruction Criteria. Had many incomplete sentences.
Already have a synonymous copy of this article.
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