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dualta 2012-01-30
Nice writing but please use paragraphs
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josip 2012-01-26
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joycel 2012-01-25
It's somewhat hard to read. Keep the language simple. Also, it needs more call to action. This was mostly informative. Thanks for trying.
Responded with comment: wish u never sent this special request, it has done me more bad than good, y give a rating of 1 n 2 star. that has really messed up my rating, n earning for that matter
Good job!
Good job!
Nicely written article
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joycel 2012-01-24
You didn't mention anything about exercise equipment; and, as mentioned in the instructions, the purpose of the press release is to market my e-commerce site offering affordable, quality equipment.