I'm sorry, but the article is poorly written and the instructions were not followed....none of them. 

No professional and seems I got nearly twice the same article 

there are some grammatical errors and I want an article about the "Top Ten Weight Loss Tips" or maybe top five weight loss tips and "taking weight loss pills" is one of the tips. 

too many long long sentences. some don't make sense. did you proof read this article you wrote? 

Very well written - Thanks 

There are too many errors in the sentences, that do not make sense 

Quite a few grammatical errors, quite a few sentences don't make sense. No sub headings as requested in spec and also don't mention the majority of the points i requested to be in the article. Sorry. 

You made some good points but the grammatical errors and the sentence structure made the article hard to read.  

not follow the instruction entirely. the promotion to the product not enough and not describe correctly. 

I didn't ask for text about '5 jobs you can get wit an IT degree' but IT jobs that will be most wanted and paid in the future. 

You need to work on your grammar! I'm being honest here - VERY BAD! To be honest I wanted to reject this article but need something quick to work with. I will have to revise most of the article. 

The article has too many grammar errors. 

Excellent article and writer. 

 

Pretty good job. 

Very well written and has great points, my target market is not students, but entrepreneurs, or even start-ups would be fine. 

Very well written, clear, concise and contained a lot of food for thought. 

 

 

 

 

 

thank you