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atoney 2012-07-16
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atoney 2012-07-16
nice writing. Note: AGAIN, DO NOT USE "Final Statement:...." as your closing paragraph..
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atoney 2012-07-14
Nicely done but with minimal Grammatical errors
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atoney 2012-07-14
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atoney 2012-07-14
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atoney 2012-07-14
Better
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atoney 2012-07-14
The main keyword is Cause of Depression not "Causes"
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atoney 2012-07-14
I don't see the last keyword
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atoney 2012-07-14
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atoney 2012-07-14
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atoney 2012-07-14
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atoney 2012-07-14
thank you
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atoney 2012-07-14
Bad title. See for yourself
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atoney 2012-07-14
Very good originalwriter
The use of the keywords is not acceptable. I explicitly pointed out that connecting words can be used to ensure the readability. Also, the semantics are not quite right. Unfortunately, I cannot accept the text in this form.
Overall pretty good. Knew the subject matter. Will have to do some rewriting and minor edits. Didn't get the impression that English was their first language; some of the grammar/word usage didn't "flow"...all easy fixes.
Worth the time saved.
Does not reach the level of professional. "amp"? in the second sentence. More research on general symptoms and treatment options are in order. An article about a medical condition needs to sound more like a medical professional wrote it.
Good value for money
A+++++++++ good quality delivered fast
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cosmic 2012-07-09
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