Great, THank you
shift from the high street? not involved in the areas where they have less experience?
Responded with comment: This is what written in wikipedia and their official website.
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joycel 2012-01-26
The word 'damn' was totally unnecessary. Otherwise, content is ok, but not very exciting or motivational. A press release is more than just information. It has to motivate people.
Good list of benefits. Grammar and punctuation will need some correction. Keyword density right-on-target!
This article is more of a sales pitch. My list of possible article ideas should be able to give you a direction. You will notice that none of them are about the product itself. Thanks for your attempt.
Responded with comment: ok
Well written for SEO.
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statoy 2012-01-21
Good research
Thank you
This will do, not great writing though.
Poor grammar, reads like it was written by a non-native English speaker.
Article okay, but with misspelled words.
Thanks...!!!
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tfbpa1 2012-01-09
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laddoo 2011-12-18
It just didn't meet our expectations. Lack of details