The 1st paragraph is good while the rest of the paragraph is generalisation. The main reasons for such high failures is the trader themselves in not being able to master the fundamental, self discipline, money mgt. and risk vs reward strategies.  

 

 

Although the article was well written with good grammer and some engaging writing, the author failed to describe the topic adequately. The article was too general and did not focus enough on the actual medical condition called 'chronic insomnia'  

Overall I like the article, but it would need some editing. If you can make a few edits I would take this article 

Very decent review, considering the lack of resources I offered. Good Job! 

did not meet my expectaations 

thank you