Some typos present, but overall better than average
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davey5 2012-07-11
Decent, a couple little things here and there I'll need to edit. For example instead of "loan more than what you need" it should be "borrow more". Thanks.
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macka5 2012-07-10
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jenrlo 2012-07-04
Thank you but the writing style is too informal and not suited to the topic.
I like this article. I just need some things added:
1. I need the first paragraph to be just a little bit longer.
2. Write a paragraph about embolization.
3. You write about side effects. Write a paragraph discussing what they are.
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