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josip 2013-04-25 for
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2013: Summer Of Love...Of Fashion: Must Haves For The Fashion Now
Grammar, spelling, sentence structure error, not a fan of the tone its written in, its way too friendly, has some awkward sentences, thanks for giving it a go.
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jaykay 2013-04-24 for
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For The Love Of Stripe: Be The Fierce In A WeSC Men's The Striped Tank
This is not the quality I was looking for.
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mikeatherton 2013-04-21 for
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For The Foodie In You: Easy, Pleasy BBQ Recipe
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Jennifer27 2013-04-19 for
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Men's Fashion Tips: Looking Stylish On A Budget
okay
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gschipper7 2013-04-09 for
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Forget the Table and Set the Floor: Kitchen House Cleaning Made Easy By Sparkle Shine Sarah
Good job and funny too.
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kzwriter 2013-04-09 for
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Online Fashion Boutique: The 21st Century Shopper's Best Friend
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ColinD60 2013-04-09 for
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10 Reasons You Should Self-Publish
The article is too formal. I wanted an article with a friendlier tone, please. Thanks.
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ramsdelli 2013-04-03 for
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The Benefits Of Crackle Nail Polish
The article is written seasonally so the reader won't be interested in it out of season. There are large scientific words used when smaller ones could have been used. The article should flow more evenly as if it were being spoken to someone they kno
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MaryTWarfz 2013-04-02 for
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Terrific Toddler: Coolest Trends For Toddler Boy Clothes Spring 2013
the content didn't engage the reader until the end
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musepursuits 2012-01-18 for
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"Nice"! Three Reasons Women Like to Wear Two Piece Swim Suits
While I laughed reading this, and the tone was supposed to be friendly, it was overly friendly, too colloquial, phrasing that renders it unusable, and not 100% according to instructions. Fun, but unusable on my site, unfortunately!
Sorry cannot approve. Cannot understand why you started with religion. I need write ups promoting the sale of flowers from our website. There were some improvements with keywords but they should be paragraphs of 70/100 words
Extremely well written and researched. Easily 7 stars (would give more if possible), would love to work with this writer again.
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dkelso 2012-01-15
nice and long article. thanks!
The first paragraph is trash and I will need to edit it quite a bit but you did give some good information. Thanks.
Not enough keywords are used, for instance Santa Ana flowers, Santa Ana florists, Santa Ana flower delivery, and other keywords you find using google related searches.
nice job and story line very friendly good flow to the article but watch the special instruction though
Very well written and GREAT Article!
Responded with comment: Hey, everyone has an opinion. No hard feelings. GOD BLESS YA!
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dkelso 2012-01-08
good article, thanks!
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abeg82 2012-01-07
Nice, thanks
Great article, great writing style. Thank you! Mireille