Great job
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macka5 2012-07-16
lacking a bit on grammer, but good content
Not bad, but needs some work.
The grammar is not very good in some places. There are typos.
Also, romanticize the idea of "wild & exotic" meats. Make it sound adventurous and exciting!
Responded with comment: Ridiculous reasons for rejections. avoid
Excellent written content for web page. Will be adding to Favorites.
Great article, the writer made a lot of research and condensed all the info in a well structured article
Many typos, such as missing spaces and/or other similar errors
Some of it didn't make sense and there wasn't that many changes from the original version.
Responded with comment: It was a well crafted piece, how can you possibly describe your business otherwise? Sorry if the language and writing style was too sophisticated for you. A note to other writers especially five stars - Avoid this time waster.
Good Job
Prompt,good material.
Not as engaging as we would like it to be.... lack of real infomation
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demeva 2012-06-26
Thanks :)
No required sub headlines; sloppy punctuation.