Unfortunately this article is filled with grammatical errors along with unusual wording and sentences that don't make sense.
Responded with comment: I am sorry that the article didn't meet your expectations but the one star rating was a little too harsh. Nonetheless, I hope that I'll be able to deliver a better article next time.
Article accepted. However, it is very clutter with only 2 paragraphs.
thank you!
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