article didn't make sense and looked like it was just a collection of facts put together without making it all come together.
Can't have a title that is a long run on sentence. Needs tightening and tying the article together by bringing back the keyword.
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teell2 2011-09-25
i found a poor quality here. thanks for trying.
The keyword is not in the title, some grammar errors.
I got a good quality article.