The article was okay but it doesn't appeal to the intended audience. Needs more info about the experience. Over saturated with descriptive words so it makes it hard to get the objective what was written.
Well written, excellent content.
The keyword was used twice almost in every sentence, the text is not natural... Same words were used over and over again
Good content, however some weird & and other pop up throughout article
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trybpo 2012-02-12
good job, thanks! would appreciate it though if you incorporate subheadings and bullets in the articles.
Occasional poor English, but good overall writing skills. Equipments is not a word used in American English. I think plumbing is too difficult of a topic for writers on the website.
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poobah 2012-02-09
Overall content not bad, however the wording seems spun poorly in a few spots, or else you just have a poor command of American English. I would have to edit too much in order to use this piece. Sorry
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