Better attempt, but still uses strange sentence construction. Will need quite a bit of editing to get in line.
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slamy enough 2012-06-11 for
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Acupuncture for Anxiety Attacks: Is it Really Effective?
Sorry, no very informative.
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rodder7 2012-06-11 for
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Old Market Coupons: A Review
The article did not meet project request.
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giladp89 2012-06-09 for
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Treatment for Post Traumatic Stress Disorder
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dmarieholtz 2012-06-09 for
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Website Online
Acceptable.
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pclafon 2012-06-08 for
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How to go about oDesk App Development
Poorly written hard to read...
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damien19 2012-06-07 for
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Understanding the Different Features of Windows 8 Including its Charms Bar
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mothersill 2012-06-06 for
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What is an Online mlm Success?
Great article! However, this request have already been filled.
Thank you
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jbug918 2012-06-06 for
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Passive Income Streams Opportunities
Needed to be more possitive and interesting.
Some spelling errors. Please do not resubmit.
Responded with comment: Will fix that next time.
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astronomy 2012-06-06 for
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Motorola Atrix: The Best Phone of 2012
Sorry, there are some strange grammar mistakes and the article doesn't follow the instructions closely enough.
Responded with comment: Will fix that next time.
nice writing
Thanks
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briley 2012-06-05
needs to edit writing. talk more about how chico chiropractic would help a client not what chiropractic is
Responded with comment: Will fix that next time.
Great job!
ok article
Since this is a beginner's article, the introduction of social media, marketing strategies, concepts of composure and speech habits are premature. Using words like "may", "should," and "usually" are vague and lack assurance to the new person.
well done
I'm sorry but the quality is not there
I'm sorry but i do not like the quality of the article
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nslim1 2012-06-01
good- thanks
Try not to put all 3 keywords in 1 sentence as you did in many paragraphs. A good article.
Just what I had in mind. Thanks.
Good attempt. But this article failed to explain and list the different types of vegetable fats and vegan friendly oils
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mcstir 2012-05-29
I can't edit this one enough to have it make sense, it is too choppy.
Good
Perfect excellent article
Many thanks
At last you have achieved what many writers have failed to achieve
Please take more of our articles
Point on, exactly what I expected.
Many thanks
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bt2007 2012-05-24
Too broad guide. Didn't give any specific advice on leveling.
Grammar needs some work.
Not related enough to my website