Please improve grammar
Typo's
Typos
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dprodr 2012-03-16
Needs longer sentences
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Thank you
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lewvin 2012-03-16
great thanks
Mispelled words and words used in the wrong tense.
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lewvin 2012-03-13
great thanks
It was a bit confusing at first, but overall flowed okay. I will have to go in and restructure some sentences which will take time on my part.
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shapmb 2012-03-06
The article was acceptable for the price.
Sentence format leads to incomplete reading of thought process. Certain words are omitted taht would complete sentence structure
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Poor english
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2003dc 2012-02-29
ok
Awesome!
rewrite , this has bad grammar.
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