I am sorry, but this is not written by a native speaking English person. Multiple grammar mistakes, multiple errors in using the wrong word (wrong register)... I am sorry, but I need a better article than this...
too much errors
The length was good and the writer made some good points but the language was overall very awkward, sounding at times like a poorly spun article
Well researched and written. Some grammatical errors. Requires only minor re-write.
Will need a little bit of touch up work and revision, but overall not bad. Thanks for the timely article!
Blank article submitted..! No title, zero word count in body.
Thank you much appeciated
Beginning with the second sentence in this article, words appear to be missing from sentences and the remaining components of the article are incoherent.
good
very nice
Needs to be proof read
Responded with comment: Thanks again and am sure anyone else who does work with you won't be disappointed
I couldn't read this article and understand what you were trying to say. It looked almost like a very poorly spun article. It almost seemed that you would change the subject in the middle of a sentence.
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netbug 2011-08-23
Good Job! Only one spot it does not read well but overall good article.
The article is to be about " harmful effects of the sun's UV rays to auto paint" this article just misses the subject and doesn't read well or flow at all .