I just found this awkward, hard to follow at times. Didn't seem to flow well. But thank you.
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OneWay 2013-04-24
No flow in the article. Let's just change the words between them.
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gogulf 2013-04-24
The writer is good but her style was not according to our requirements
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demeva 2013-04-24
Fair article
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raul87 2013-04-21
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geeken 2013-04-17
Hi,
This article does not trigger much emotion in the reader and is more like a generic article. I am looking for articles that share some information and then drive the reader to click the read more button at the end.
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KM4375 2013-04-16
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KM4375 2013-04-16
perfect thanks
Spelling mistakes, the article does not read smooth and flow, seem to jump around, the use of water and being clean is important, but used to much. exercise? then goes right into a treatment The use of bullet points would have worked good.
Thanks.
Good article.
It's always good to conclude strongly in the final paragraph in future works please.
Information you have on taking glutathione orally is not extensive enough. Going in depth to outline the importance on Acytl glutathione because it can permeate through the intestine while regular glutathione will be broken down in the acid.
Not sure about the writing style, it does not refer to the recipe book, for which it is intended...
Responded with comment: I really wish you had been more specific in your instructions. Or else, you could have asked me to revise............at least my effort would not have been wasted this way.
Writer was prompt and used great english
well done. took care of all of my requests.
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