too many filler words, referring to yourself. Needs to be written strictly as a community description for a page on a website. I think the information was very good, just not organized the way it was requested. sry
Excellent! Awesome amount of info on housing! Perfect job! Please write more for me!
I really like it! Good job on the amount of Real Estate & housing info! Please write more - just please remove the "I told you, ridiculous" and "Folks," comments - that's not professional for a webpage. The rest is awesome!
too many filler words to meet the quota - this is for a webpage - that is not acceptable
I would really prefer if you don't try to use filler words. This is for a page on a website. Not an article. You need to describe the community like described in the instructions without the filler words to meet the word count quota.
Excellent work once again, thanks!
Good mention. thx
The article is not bad but full of meaningless content, I've clearly said it should be product description type.
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Helena 2012-11-28
Excellent writing, thanks!
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kashem 2012-11-27
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