Well written and good information so far as it went, but you did not follow the instructions I gave. 

Thank you. 

 

too technical and will not be understood by readers 

Please read first the instructions. I need the article on a profesional tone, not a friendly one. Thank you for trying. 

the article is ok but i don't find the "cervical cancer symptoms" keyword to make a link from it i also need to know if the spin is good. i need the spin version to distribute it automatically to blogs and articles directories 

Responded with comment: adenocarcinoma cervical cancer symptoms is your keyword. There is two of them. Please get your instructions right. It takes 2-3 hours of research to get out an article for 2.43 usd. not even worth a happy meal. Be a little more considerate. 

Good job but didn't talk enough about first page on the internet for increasing business.  

It does not cover the given instructions. 

 

 

Responded with comment: mawari bhai didnt understand english??? or up to your marwari tricks here???? AVOID  

 

Just okay. 

Nicely Written 

Article is not about bittorrent. 

Thank you. 

This is a good article but I already have a review of Tintin. Sorry you did not like the film, I had a pretty good time. Then again I dont have a history with the character. 

Thank you.
 

The order of these articles was for German writers, not English 

Extensive rewrite of sentence structure required. Nonsensical descriptions and poorly defined paragraphs. With more practice perhaps this writer's ability will improve. For the amount paid I can't complain, though. Good try.  

not what was asked for 

Will require reformatting, but the content is acceptable. 

Thank you. 

Great article, well written 

 

Too many corrections needed