Factual information is a bit sketchy, need something for concrete. Like rubbing ice cubes on the acne?
Pimples is another term for acne. That raised another red flag. Please double and triple check your sources.
Well written. Nice flow
Thanks, what I needed
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bhjmom 2011-11-22
Grammar issues
Has inaccuracies in the content. Article does not relate to the reader, does not flow - has a very "Medical Journal" voice
Nicely written. Thanks
Well written. Nice flow
Ty, very well written
good
Nice work and really quick turnaround time...
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bhjmom 2011-11-17
The sentences are too long, the structure of the article is not quite right.. It is hard to read..
Good content, reasonably well written
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bhjmom 2011-11-16
english not native language
Responded with comment: this is not a reason to reject my article. you had not mentioned in your instructions that you needed only native writers. very bad indeed