Good job. Sometimes you have repetitive words such as "state of the art" 

Sorry that I should have been more clear on my instruction, as this article is suppose to provide tips or plans for average users and not for a total newbie or dummies. For example, first and second paragraph is considered to be very basic knowledge. 

 

 

Not follow my instructions 

Responded with comment: You rejected my work though I followed every word you said. You are what you speak. You can't even express yourself well enough. Improve your vocabulary and grammar before you judge other people's work. 

 

Not really what I'm looking for 

 

Little technically wrong with this, but poor word choices and repetitive sentence structure make it tough to read. Not quite up to snuff. 

You do not write as I suggested. 

Grammar is very off, and some sentences do not make much sense.  

Great job! Exceeded more than what I expected. Followed instructions and went into great detail!! 

 

Thank you very much for the article. It was well written. 

 

Not the list of features, pros and cons I had hoped for. But I think I can work with it. 

Thanks! 

 

 

Great review, well done :) 

 

This articles is what i need 

Looks good