Great job, thank you.
A little bit forced, but it fits. Thanks
Overall very good, thank you.
some misspellings, grammar concerns
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Dino23 2012-10-11
sorry, I alredy wrote an article by myself, thank you any way :)
Followed instructions properly. Basic English tense errors but well done.
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Overall a good article. Please make sure you follow the instructions if you decide to write for us again. I will let it slide this once because it was a decent article. I will not accept articles that do not follow our guidelines. Thanks.
Overall a good article. Please make sure you follow the instructions if you decide to write for us again. I will let it slide this once because it was a decent article. I will not accept articles that do not follow our guidelines. Thanks.
there are some grammar error which i can't accept.
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binshu 2012-09-30
Good Article! Thanks!
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binshu 2012-09-29
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UomoMB 2012-09-28
Nicely done. You have given me a great article to work with. Good job!
Thank you for the great article, it was 2x's longer than I requested and I appreciate that!
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alvinb 2012-09-26
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nicely done. Thank you very much.
English needs to be 100% perfect
Use more complex grammatical structures.
Write as you were me; the editor of the SunGoddess Magazine talking to her readers! Engage them actively throughout the article, they need to feel I am there talking to them
thank you
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