not written like it is news 

 

 

written as requested 

 

 

Not good enough, errors and awkward sentences. 

Really nice job on the article. I will definitely use this writer again. 

written as requested 

 

Your information is too generic. 

thanks 

 

the first line is completely capitalized, i did ask that you do not capitalize anything, now i have to edit the line of text. added work :( 

 

In overall good and sadly you didn't follow my instructions very well. Thanks 

 

Sorry not quite what I needed. Good writing none the less. 

Thanks. 

 

The English is too simple, sorry 

 

Terrible grammar