doesn't read well at all.
Does not read well.
The special instructions were not followed. The text is not related to the target audience and there are no references to any research.
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d2dash 2012-04-23
great writer!!!
Sorry, there mistakes in construction of phrases (english)
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dencha 2012-04-01
Formatting requirement. Please check.
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dencha 2012-03-31
Doesn't make sense, please Improve grammar