Your grammar was horrible but I think I can fix most of it within 5 minutes.
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Lulu06 2012-02-17
The article is readable but has several spelling errors.
Great article, thanks.
Content makes little sense due to some or all of the following factors: spelling errors, missing words, bad grammar, etc.
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