Just what I was after, thank you !
Thank you!!!
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"professional advice that your location even an advantage" does not make sense at all. "if your location experience rainy weather" does not make sense either
Not a bad attempt but only addressed one part of my request.
I think my breif was not suffiently clear. I am happy with this one article.
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LPerry 2012-08-22
Excellent! Thank you.
Good work
Good article.
Pretty good article. Note: We 'eat' breakfast, we don't 'take' breakfast (unless we're taking it somewhere). We 'eat' food & 'drink' water, but we take pills. Couple grammar errors.
Very nice article. Note: I think it's better to distinguish between 'simple' carbohydrates (bad) and 'complex' (good). Oatmeal is a complex. Thank you.
Good article.
Great article! Thank you.
Decent article overall, considered accepting, but too much to fix. Not sure what "do your own grocery" means. I disagree with much of the content. All animal meat has saturated fats. Fruit juice has the same amount of sugar as soda.
Nice article. Thank you!
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josip 2012-08-07
Pretty good. Grammar note: "most of these advice are unfamiliar" is not correct. "most of this advice is unfamiliar" is correct.
Ok article. Some parts aren't accurate. "Dogged determination" isn't required to build a relationship. 5 minutes is adequate. I'll rewrite. Noticed a few grammar mistakes, too.
Pretty good. Remember, we're never, never, never talking about the products...only specific benefits. They join to get the products.
Great writing, I could tell they really looked into it before writing it.
Okay article. Again, it's not really about the products themselves. We don't follow up products with benefit-based promotions. We follow up benefit-based promotions with a product later down the line.
Good article. Remember: We're not promoting the product itself, we're just promoting it's benefits. Ex: "Want an easy way to lose those wrinkles around your eyes? Give me your email/phone & I'll show you an amazing new technique."
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