Acceptable but some of the sentences have a word or two left out to make the thought complete.
I think you could do better if you would take time to really understand the message in the article rather than just trying to reword the thoughts.
5 stars.., thank you
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bjarne 2012-08-14
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bjarne 2012-08-13
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bjarne 2012-08-13
I don't need you to write them as a whole. I told you to rewrite them in past tense with no active voice. I just need them to be converted that way. I don't need you to rewrite them word per word.
Responded with comment: You have mentioned not to write in passive voice. I agree with past tense part. Give me another chance.
thanks
Nice article.
Thanks
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bjarne 2012-08-06
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rmahon 2012-08-05
lack of communication. she just does not understand what I seeing.
good, but not enough for a homepage
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cosmic 2012-08-02
Responded with comment: What was wrong with my article? You should have assigned a reason for rejection.
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bjarne 2012-08-01
Great work!
Nice article. Thank you!
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bjarne 2012-07-24
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bjarne 2012-07-23
The flow wasn't there. There were sentences where i had to go back and read again to get a clearer understanding. I'm sorry but i have to reject this.
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