Thanks, great article.
Too many language mistakes, would have taken too much correcting. In a lot of places it's a bit jumbled and nonsensical.
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good writer.will hire him again
Nice job
I counted more than 15 mistakes on grammar, punctuation, correct word usage, etc. I feel bad because he spent time, but I STILL have to format my article and find pictures to insert in order to publish. I cannot spend a LOT of time editing.
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perfect
There was no effort made with the title, some of the grammar and flow was not perfect.
Though the overall context of the article was good, the errors have meant that I will have to amend and correct them.
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