This article was more about the causes of bad breath when all I really want is the relationship between bad breath and aging. 

very good writing, thanks! 

Thank you. You miss some point that I mention on the instruction but overall is OK and I can take care the rest.

Thanks again, keep up this good work - I have many articles for you in the nearly future. 

should format the article properly. but the content is good. so thanks. 

American English - Article requested in UK English.

Also, the language structure in some sentencesare slightly poor. 

Language issues - the article doesn't flow or read nicely. 

above average grammatical skills. average ability to follow instructions. great content. thank you writer :) 

It's just not a well written article, it would take too much time for me to fix it.  

nice article, well written.