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BGD.sb 2012-05-16
Wasn't reader friendly. Choppy writing. And, I posted it two minutes ago and the this was up for me to review that fast? Makes me feel that it was not original content. I must have a original content.
Osteoporosis is the main keyword but over 20 times in text are really too much. Article will be edited from me.
I need more key phrase density(i.e. more occurrences of all of the key phrases), especially on the supplementary phrases listed in the keyword list. Also if you can take paragraph about the calculator out as that isn't relevant. Thanks
The keyword is only 2 times in the text. I have asked for 1.5%-2% which is about 7-10 times.
The content of this article is very good but the English is very poor and needs to be corrected.
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Joe268 2012-05-12
Some grammar problems, but a pretty good article.
Good article.
too many mistakes!
Grammar is very poor - making the article almost impossible to read.
grammar all over the place clearly a badly spun article
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