You didn't write about the topic requested, which is Dermology hair removal cream, instead you wrote the article on Dermology stretch marks cream. 

Very nice article spoilt in places by misspells, and peculiar english.
But the content and the manner that the content was put together is worth the cost of the article.
I would use this writer again  

Thanks 

Good article. Well done. 

Could have been better 

 

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good thank you 

nor good grammer 

 

 

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