The article doesn't read very well and the special instructions for the keyword weren't followed. 

 

Love you, its perfect, the grammar is a bit strange in places, but this is probably so it can be spun. I am going to add you to Favourite writers list. 

 

this is not a review of your holiday at the villa, it is a description of the villa, did you even read the project instructions? it was supposed to be a description of your stay at the property 

Responded with comment: sorry my bad... 

good info thanks!!! 

Obviously this writer was either knowledgeable on the subject or did quality research on it. Job well done, thank you 

Did not put in keywords from the special instructions. 

 

 

Thanks 

bad grammar
 

Not well researched 

Hi, sorry but im really after a brief history of the author mainly, then you can talk about the product, this article doesnt really talk much about the author 

Responded with comment: sorry i thought you asked about panic away..thanks anyway.. 

This article sounds like it was written by someone who doesn't know English very well. I could muddle through and correct the phrasing and sentence structure, but since I'm paying for the work, I shouldn't have to do that. 

 

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