I felt like this was put through a word spinner as there were many words being used in uncommon ways. Most of it made sense, but it lacked a natural flow and so I found it difficult to read. 

I almost accepted this article but I found it slightly too difficult to read... in the sense that it lacked flow. Words were used in uncommon ways and so although it made sense, it lacked a natural feel. My standards for this project are very high. 

 

This is an awesome article. Incredibly well written and researched.  

Good write-up. 

Good write-up. 

Thanks! 

solid article, thanks :) 

Great stuff, thank you 

 

 

 

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We're sorry, but we were looking for an article we wouldn't need to fix up much, but this one has some grammar issues, as well as some incorrect info regarding building muscle and how that burns fat, etc. 

Thank you. Very well done and quick. Have added to my Favorite Writers list. 

Thanks! 

Thanks 

 

 

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