Wow! Very well written article. Written like an expert in losing weight. A little formal though and a couple of errors had me go to 4 stars. But I would definitely recommend. Thank you.
Didnt followed the instructions. The grammer is not upto the mark.
Great Job!
Thanks, nicely written!
I told you to write in personal pronouns.
It should be written like the person is in the room with you. Write about your reader and not in the 3rd person.
2ndly, you need to improve on the grammar and yout one is rigid. Can be more friendly a
with some minor corrections, it will be perfect
too much stylistic errors, some phrases look google translated. It is very visible thata person who doesn't know english well wrote it
Good job
Good job
Thanks
Special conditions included stating very clearly the content needed to grammatically correct and to flow nicely. This article does NOT do that, its waffles on about nothing. REJECTED: : (
Very nice, thank you
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