it would take too much time to get this article to the point where i could use it. some sentances just dont make sense or sound very forced. i said in my instructions if it did not read well or was spun i would reject it. 

 

Good writing, but too much content is off topic 

Excellent  

clearly did not read my instructions 

Thanks 

Opening sentence is awkward, it would be best to write natural then to try to keyword stuff. 

top class article thanks...