The writer is basically rephrasing all the technical specifications in the product brochure. I need some explanations in layman terms for the benefits one will get on certain technical features. 

Guidelines were met for the article creation. The grammar and article flow needs some work though. 

Please put a little more content specific about South Jordan Utah and why someone may want to move there and information that would be useful to someone considering moving to South Jordan 

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Unfortunately, this article isn't written in fantastic English. If this can be looked at again and errors fixed, we should be happy. Please also note that this is going on our blog so it needs to be written from our point of view and not 3rd person. 

bad article flow, didn't follow instructions, grammar errors. I have already provided detailed instructions on what I want, but it seems you just disregarded them. 

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Poor english skills, sentences didnt make sense.