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cray10 2012-06-15
Not the flow I was looking for.
The last 2 Paragraphs dont fit into my Site.
Not follow my instructions
Good writing overall.
good
It's suppose to be a feature story about the business - Izzy's dog bakers. There's no relation at all in the article about the store and the story is for the general public, not dog breeders.
Good try but can still be improved. I get what you mean most of the time, you just have to write more clearly.
i need an article that respond to the exact question not basic info about health insurance
I'm sorry the english isn't strong enough
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