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grammar errors make it hard to understand
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NOT GREAT!!!!
well done few mistakes but its good
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Thank you, great job.
The reasons weren't great.
Also there seemed to be undertones of negativity.
Lastly, there wasn't much variation in reasons.
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xpi775 2012-11-22
Very nice rewrite!
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