Thanks for the effort, but there were just too many grammatical errors and your knowledge of the subject wasn't sufficient to cover the needs of the article. I recommend choosing subjects you are familiar with, or do a little more research.
Responded with comment: Thank I appreciate your comments.
Thank you
Ticket JBV-563414: too many spelling and grammar mistakes. The basic tone of the Ebook was not in American English which I require
poor English and grammer, comes across as a very poor spin - not the quality I am used to from i-writer writers - sorry
Responded with comment: ok
The article should be about women (not men)
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